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  Hi! Hello there!
  Take a seat!

  Oh, good day,
  leave your complaint after the beep

  I'm sorry sir, she's busy now
  regarding another jester on the prowl

  You're not here to complain?
  Then what are you here for?

  It's certainly not a compliment,
  she's never gotten one of those before



  So, what exactly is it now?

  Did she screw up your life,
  lie to you,
  make you foul?

  She's ruefully sorry and morose,
  she'll take the beatings,
  because she doesn't know
  where she is, or who she is,
  she missed the meetings

  She doesn't care anymore,
  she has no interest in such trifle matters

  And she's arrogant enough to say,
  that she's above you anyway.
©2007-2009 ~A-Hopeful-Happiness
:icona-hopeful-happiness:

Author's Comments

I did not intend for this to be a break up poem, but someone I read it to said it sounded like one. It was in fact a response to a friend I was annoyed with.

Use to your own discretion.

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:iconnaturallysane7:
Sad... I really liked it. So meaningful. I agree with the person who said it was a break up poem. Great work!

--
"Revenge is sweet, but letting go of anger at those who wronged you is a smart route to good health."
Don't end up like [link]
:icona-hopeful-happiness:
It was Rad. I swear, this wasn't meant to be one of them, but I suppose if someone wanted to favorite it for that, it'd be okay.

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"This is an evil world, and sometimes I begin to think that all the wickedness in it is not entirely bottled up inside the dragons."
-St. George
:iconnaturallysane7:
I really did like it though!

--
"Revenge is sweet, but letting go of anger at those who wronged you is a smart route to good health."
Don't end up like [link]

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June 11, 2007
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